I got feedback for my advert drafts from two of my media classmates: Sarah Page and Aimee Smith. Their feedback was vital for me to make improvements to my work because they understood the course from the industry perspective so they knew what I needed to include to get the most professional product possible.
Click on the image to the right to listen to my Voki feedback from Sarah. I found her feedback very helpful as it was from the critical viewpoint of a media student because she mentioned how I could use media technologies to improve the quality of my product.
Click this image to listen to the Voki feedback I recieved from Aimee. She gave me feedback based around the conventions of real media products and how successful my product was in relation to this. Her feedback will help me to improve before I create my final product meaning that I can make the most successful product possible.