This is my second advert draft. I decided to keep the picture the same as I like the way it clearly links to my music video and links my main performers together.
The main audience feedback that I got was that my font was quite difficult to read and I needed to have different fonts for the less important information. I chose to use two fonts that I had downloaded to keep the advert unique in comparison to others.
The one thing I will look at changing for a next draft is the image or the positioning of the main text as I think it needs to be more central.